Yet another one of my idea's updated.

Yes, im that bad with deciding which to run with, I gave another past idea a update, although compared to the other idea's I dont think its as strong. I dont think its strong enough to run with as an idea. I only find it aesthetically pleasing, but it doesnt really answer the brief so think ill be moving swiftly onwards from this idea and returning back to my other idea's. Anyway, here it is.

This turned more into a technical exercise from folloing tutorials and twisting them to suit. But this design I think has hit a brick wall and will go no further.